Ollie May

Damn, you guys are good. I go away to make coffee and come back to answers! Thanks again!

Thanks much for the reviews and the advice guys! My biggest problem by far is adverb abuse, I like them too much for my own good. However, I'm now in ...

Thank you! :D If you ever come across those awkward parts, do give me a heads up again!

Man, when you decide to violate people's comfort zones, you do an excellent job! Incest, child abuse, AND parent abuse. This is great work; edgy and very well written. I ...